by Cleevedreams
Loved the story but it needs to be more. Id love to see this play out into a long story. Im living ficariously through your words
But surely that’s not all of it! I do hope you add an additional chapter or two. Well done, but it feels like just the appetizer.
I've enjoyed the story so far, but...
At the start of both chapters is the following warning, "Editor's note: this story contains scenes of incest or incest content." There has been nothing in either chapter to justify it. I'm hoping additional chapters will be forthcoming with a menage of Tom, Debbie and Kat, so that the warning was not just an unfulfilled come-on.
So is your hero of the story going to monitor Kat from now on? Looks like Ivana, Olga and Anton are the villains of the your story. Can't wait for the next 5 stories from you.