All Comments on 'Mother & Daughter'

he is the kind of man i dream of. those two are sooo lucky.

I enjoyed the development of the story line - would like to see more character development and the story span a longer period of time. Perhaps some sharing...

How should I put this in a few words? A sensual, and delightful evening these three spent together. However, my naughy mind kept waiting for traces of the mother and daughters past relationship. This story seemed like the ending of a story that, really, should have been Jaynes. The Master is apparently not her father. Was envy the only link to her feelings and desire to be owned by him? This is the climax to a much deeper and involved story of lust. Show us MORE of Jaynes' preparation by her mama...even during her youth. What...made her decide servitude, and not collage? Why was she NOT a virgin, still? dicqblacqatx@yahoo.com