All Comments on 'Mother and Son Discover Each Other for Fun'

You ruined this with the last paragraph, just keep it as mom/son

That last paragraph ruined the whole story for me. 1**

Nice story got ruined in the last paragraph, I hate the story and the writer .

A good story until the last paragraph: a silly ending

Was the perfect story until you screwed it up with that last paragraph....GEEZ

Was a 3 star story till the last paragraph. One star. Also son isn’t supposed to be capitalized for it’s a description not a name.

why authors introduce outsiders into a mom/son relationship that ruins the mood entirely is beyind me. I gace you 2* because I liked it until the last bit.

The last paragraph ruined what was a good story.

I'm glad that it was a sexual awaking for mom and I want to read more about her adventures

Yeah, the last paragraph ruined the story.

Was really good till the end. That was the only way you could have killed the mood. To bad to it had potential

You had a great story going until your last paragraph. It had no relevance to the story at all.

Ruined a perfectly awesome story by having mom turn into a whole in the last paragraph..

Your story was great until the end. Was ok to hook up with Janice, and maybe she could be included in a 3way with her son. But to start fucking his friends is wrong! The ONLY way to redeem yourself is to reveal the baby is really your sons, because all other guys use a condom!

There is nothing like having a great story and then fucking it up at the end. I see I’m not the only one who sees it that way.

i gotta say i liked it all the way up to when she got knocked up that kinda killed it for me

turning to a whore and probably sucking a lot of cocks was its downfall

Great story till the end. PG OK, but Author when you decide to kill a great story you don't mess around. From a solid 5 to a 1 star with a couple of sentences...I wasn't expecting a love story to go to scum of the earth whore...

Definitely was an amazing story until the end. She didn't have to get pregnant or become a MILF to his friends. But nothing wrong with hooking up with Janice. Should have expanded more on the bisexual issues.

It was a great story.

but the ending destroyed all it's charm.

Great story till the end. Then you killed a 5 star story. You don't mess around... 1 star

An incredibly erotic and sex filled story. Especially since his mum took on many of his friends including one female.

I turned into a complete slut I don't love my son he forced me to blow him so I fuck all his mates. So I don't even know who go me pregnant and he has no idea what a slut I am.

What could have been a hot and loving story, turned into a complete let down.

The story started well and would have given it 5 stars but unfortunately the ending is so bad that the story deserves only one star.

WTF? You turned a lovely romance, even though incestuous, into another slut story. liked it until you turned her into just another slut headed to Maury

Hilariously bad ending. Why would you do that? It's so out of place and unnecessary. Absolutely bizarre. 1*