All Comments on 'Mother-Daughter Deception Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wimp city

alway want some one else fucking their woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved it

Ignore the negative comment. The story is really good. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Confusing time-scale

Your first chapter says Lisa is 21. Then at the end of the second page, she has to go to an important business meeting, so if she's in business, presumably she's left school. Yet in Chapter 2, she's afraid of being late for school.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

WimpAss Faggot

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What is this cuckold bullshit?

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