All Comments on 'Mother Diaries Pt. 01'

Finally figures out he should not have sex with his parent and should find someone his own age.

At first, I considered giving the author a rating of 3 for several minutes. However, after some thought, I decided to use 2. This seems like a rushed meet a deadline story (possibly the rough draft got uploaded by mistake?? One could hope?) instead of a carefully developed story.

Get an editor, very painful to read.

Get an editor, consider getting a thesaurus, and if the youngest character is 19, Mom is probably 40. So, add an abundance of pubic hair to mom because she is not the one who is 19.