All Comments on 'Mother Futa Ch. 05'

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EromanticaEromanticaabout 8 years ago
DISAPPOINTED! - Hercules aka Kevin Sorbo

"She always told herself that if Adam had gotten her pregnant, she'd be more than willing to bear his child." It's ashamed. That would have been hot. Still, a great story though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Keep It Up!

Fantastic installment to the series. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that whatever sexual excursions occur that they involve Adam. :)

PilotMoonDogPilotMoonDogalmost 8 years ago
Good stuff

If you continue this would you consider writing a scene that has Martha & Laurel penetrating each other at the same time? That's something of a favourite of mine in futa fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Alright, futanari Lesbo Lust unleashed

So much better than the last chapter, there was plenty of raw sex, lust and respectful sexual mutual mauling, I liked it! Although you made a typo type of math error re-guarding Katie's pregnancy of being close to halfway, when she was already past the five month point, so if you wrote that she was late in her second trimester it would have been more appropriate. ( just to help if you ever need to edit prior to getting it published )

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