All Comments on 'Mother in Law Finds the Courage'

All I can say is more please

I'm not really into my mother in law but now my wife's sister is a different story. If I ever had the opportunity to be with her, I'd do it in a heartbeat if I thought I could trust her. But she'd probably want me to leave my wife for her once she got me in the sack.

Please more I hope mil and wife could share him but that many chapter to come please add more

Very hot story. Please come out with part 2 quickly.

Fantastic beginning, please continue on with the story, and thanks for sharing.

Brilliant

A very good story! I really enjoyed it. I hope you will not make us wait for the next chapter.

Outstanding story!

I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Great Story... I hope to read more in the near future..

Nicely done. Well written with a very credible premise. Not sure a sequel can top this one.

Narrative was rough at the beginning, but improved a bit as story went on. Try to get an editor and mentor, if you can. 4*

Great plot line, enjoyed reading this first chapter

Loved it. More please

Very good first story. Keep it going.

Lotmore. Please

Loved it, great effort. If I might add, you switch tense now and again and it confused me part way through, otherwise brill

Outstanding!! Looking forward to part 2. I wonder if there is a way to have her mother talk with her daughter about how her father ignoring her. Get the daughter to volunteer the SIL.

Well done for being brave Please revue everything that came together in the process of writing this tale that gave you enjoyment as the creator with a view to repeating all good things on the next tale and adjusting all not so good things for maybe a different way next time Thank you for sharing your talent KrBillT bill49t@gmail.com

Good story overall, but it needs some editing. This feels like you edited just once. It needs another round of to clean up the grammar and syntax.

just a great story

Outstanding story. I couldn't stop reading till I finished it.I sure hope you continue.

maine1stretcher@yahoo.com

One of the best stories I have read on here. Looking forward to how your relationship develops with your MIL

To many nice people in this story; the story needed a villain, and anal❗️

Great story! Looking forward to more.

Wow Love this story. Are you going to carry on

Wooow what a story. Can imagine.

Great story. Definitely continue and write more!! I loved it so much. Especially because it reminds me of my MIL, who lived with us for over 6 years. I'd love to share about her. Get me at find_two at the hot mail dot com and I'll get back to you.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

Hot! Sexy! Plausible. I wish I got to live it.

A sexcellent story. This was fun and HOT.