All Comments on 'Mother in Law's Love'

A great story! I can’t wait until the saga continues. Please hurry and tell us what happens. I wish that my mother in law would take care of me like Alyssa did Aaron.

Nice story, but I could only give 4 stars because the character’s names kept changing, which was distracting. Looking forward to Chapter 2

Mixed the names up several times, either an old story retold or careless proofing.

Needed to be proof-read as on page two we get introduced to Heather.

Not bad except for the name changes toward the end.

I really, really, really, REALLY hate getting to the end of a story that doesn't have a chapter number in the title and finding out only THEN it's not a complete story.

Good story - need a little better information on the basic premise that the wife isn't too sick but can't stay awake past 8 PM. Sounds serious to me or is there something else going on?

Good story. I agree with the others who commented. Please proof read it. Still it was hot. Looking forward to reading the next part.

Absolutely delicous.

—Lorencino

Yes, you do need to proof read, but you are the first Literotica writer I've read who clearly knows the difference between the transitive verb to lay and the intransitive verb to lie. Thank you for that!

It is a bit unusual but relationships like this do happen occasionally. Keeping it in the family is one way to save marriage in difficult situations. Sometimes reasons justify the action.

Loved the premise..and the fucking..but please make one small edit. As the massage begins you refer to Aaron as Danny..the character in your other stories.

A good story But please remove at least 2 references to Heather. Thanks.

Will there be a second part because I really, really enjoy this.

Why one star?

If storyline was about lust between mother-in-law and son ok

Justification used in storyline is slap in face for All spouses who go without sex for years due to illnesses etc. And I know some in this situation

I am.fully aroused

Great story… but edit! Heather?

Why say to be continued when you had no plans on another chapter