All Comments on 'Mother in law's New Boyfriend'

I stroke my cock fast whishing it was Jen worshipping Steve's big cock

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When you write a cuck story USE the cuck tag

one star for lying

about the incest that never happened

and about the cuck shit that did but wasnt tagged

how old are u? are u even permitted on this site?

I always love to see a new writer in the fold and this was a worthy first effort. Two comments, altho you do not say this is a part 1, it seems to cry out for another chapter in which his wife is introduced to the dream cock. Also, PLEASE employ the help of a volunteer Beta Reader or Editor. There are hundreds of them available and we don't get overly many requests since there are so many of us. I saw two dozen glitches of grammar or tense or missing letters and that was until I quit counting. If you wish, I would volunteer to take a quick look at your next effort. In any case, DO keep 'em coming.

Don’t leave me hanging like that. Let’s see them switch partners

You absolutely need a proofreader and editor. There are many writing, usage, and spelling errors.

You’re telling us that they had to work from home due to Covid but nothing else was affected?

And why the Sam hell do they live within walking distance of her mothers house, and why the hell would they receive parcels for her mother? And why the hell does anyone want to to see geriatrics fuck?

Damn dude. Get help.

Another fucked up cuck wannabe story. What rock do you guys crawl out from under? A truly shitty first attempt at introducing the Lit audience to what you think is an erotic story. There are thousands like this, all equally as bad, or worse. Stop writing if this is all you have to offer.

Its always fun when a wife and husband are able to talk about what turns them on. Whenever my wife or I see a sexy girl or hot guy out we tease the other about them. It leads to some hot fucking at home. Lately a friend of mine has been the object of obsession with my wife. I have had her use his name as I am fucking her. Who knows where this will lead? Its fun.

The "garbage" just keeps coming.

if she screws steve will he stay with the slut or go over and do her mom

Part 2 please enjoyed

(f32) and (f62) just a couple of the dozens of writing mistakes compounding the host of editing mistakes in this broken pile of shit, and that's before you even discuss the plot, or lack of one.

No sequel pleasssseee.

Just more stupid cucky shit and that is by reading the first three and last sentences.

Hey Whackdoodle. Older people have sex. It's very common. If you are lucky, and take care of your health, you too may have sex when you are older. Of course, if you continue to insult older people, you might not get older. The story was limited and incomplete. The author should keep trying. -3-

Excellent I hope you get to see him taking Jen and you get to Fill up her Mum

What's this about? He wants to suck Steve's cock! Lousy story.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG there is no way this isnt a retread with a new pen name.

This redefines horribly stupid. At some point while you were spanking it to the thought of this story you rmind, however ill it is, still must have said "Dude this is fucking bad" and sadly, you didn't listen.

Stop hiding in your closet...yes its a well known fact that guys who fantasize about their wives having a HUGE cock to fuck, tend to be either bi or full on gay yet in denial.

Leave that closet pony boy and ride that sausage like the tube snake dancer you truly are. That way, once you find the monster cock you seem to salivate over, you'll be too busy to put feces to internet paper and we'll never have to read this shit again.

@Whackdoodleabout plenty of people have their parcels sent elsewhere if they know they will not be home, like amazon hubs. A lot of people steal packages off of doorsteps.

Some people live close to their families. It isn't even that relevant here. The writer didn't need that to justify the pop in, but I personally know of people who live on the same street as another family member.

AND THEN, you slip into cuck shit.

No more please

**Get an editor.

Thanks everyone for the feedback. I've been reading on this site for years but never submitted before.

Apologies if it doesn't meet the high standards on this site. I have adhd and I really find it hard to concentrate and focus on reading especially when it my own thoughts I am trying to read.

Any volunteer in helping in any way would be greatly appreciated.

P.s this isn't a cuck story

So does she fuck moms boyfriend and does son in law fuck mother in law?

Do they tag team both?

wow ! that is such a good story ...thanksssss !

the 3 of them sound super sexy !

What kind of guy is that? He fucks his mother-in-law and then gives him the sex pictures of this one? Are you still right in your head? And he and his wife have nothing else to do with this ass as the third to live out their sex fantasy? Sorry, but this is a really below the belt story! 1/5!!

A nice first effort. Please write what you want to write about. This category is notoriously tough on writers, so please continue to submit. Try to get a good proofreader or editor, it will help. Lastly, this category is called Loving Wives for a reason. Whatever you decide a Loving Wife is, you can write about and submit here. Some will like, and some will burn you down. Just consider the source when evaluating the comments section. Cheers!

Not bad at all. Hope the story continues. Maybe the boyfriend can seduce the wife and the husband can watch from the closet without the wife knowing.

Great start, can't wait for the next installment. Nice read a story, based in the UK.

Needs part two please

Quite interesting! Brought back some memories. To make it simple, I was fucking my wife's mother discreting when she introduced to her daughter, now my wife. For 25 years now I've been having pussy...mouth, anal, as well from her mother still hot and sexy at 65. Mother is still the better, more erotic and nothing is off limits. Both are about 5'5", my wife 135; mom 155. I'm blessed. I'm black, their bbc bull banging them with a almost 11 inches of wrist thick cock whenever, where ever I want. Own them both, body and soul. And, yes I have to disclipine the bitches sometimes for flounting their sexiness....usually by hard hand spanking, but mother gets out of hand at times and its my belt over my lam on her bare sexy little ass. But its a joy, to watch my thick black cock [11 inches of it] spreading and stretching their little white pussies, and yes, their tight asses, sliding in and out with those pussy and ass lips tightly wrapped around it. It's a thrill listening to their gasps for air when I buried myself balls deep, calling them my little white bitches, and fill 'em with big loads of black sperm filled cum. The know what good orgasms are, and despite their moaning, crying, and begging me to go easy, love me all the more.

Both will tell you quickly, its the biggest and best cock they even sucked or got fucked with. I'm taking her mother cross-country next month [two weeks] to visit her last family [sister] dying. You know I'll be humping her pussy and ass, all I want. She's also agreed to a three-day stay and come as my bitch to an old wife wrapping group I was a member of, for a little extra fun and entertainment. She's a good looking white bitch and all my black and white buddies back at some of the spots will get a good look and know I'm fucking the white bitch....and even taking her to a nude beach, and parade you white ass around and smiling, letting them know I'm banging the old white bitch with my bbc. Nothing more enjoyable watching those white guys and gals when they watch us strut naked on the beach. I hang big when flaccid, I'm a shower folks. White pussy was made for black cocks.

Come on man! Even this lame mess causes some anonymous bitch, who happens to be an 11”bbc, post his own little fantasy story. It’s obvious, from his badass posturing, that he’s a 5’6”, black sissy who only dreams of a white bitch even speaking to him without him pissing his Dockers.

Take it from me as a woman, when I see an attractive black man, I just want to suck and fuck him until I pass out! And then do it again and again and... P

Story needs a lot of proof reading. I would love to see more of the story.

Please, can they swap partners in a chapter 2