by chris99999
It was so far beyond the pale I couldn't get past the first half page. She's 40, he's 21?
hope there's a part 2 with so called right time mentioned just before he came
That first taboo touch that that opens the verboten window must be exploited before being slammed shut forever. Mom was so smart in the second opportunity to be assertive.
Very well written in content and mechanics.
Sometimes a comment makes me laugh out loud. The anonymous one about the big age difference is such a comment. They read it knowing that it's a Mother & Son story, so what did they expect? There are certain types of stories that I don't read. I look at the title and the summary, and if it's not to my liking I move on. I'm not stupid enough to read it!
Thank you so much for this. I enjoyed it as it almost mirrored something that happened in my own life. I will add you and read more of your work.
One question I have is how one sees any comments on a story submitted. Either I can not figure it out or no one has left any comments.
Chris, Your bio states that you are well educated and that you have varied interests. However, your 100+ stories all seem to have the same theme - Incest/Taboo. And the six or seven that I have read all begin to sound very similar. I also find it interesting that you mix American terms with British spellings. Maybe you are Canadian, I'm not sure. As for your writing, I wish you would branch out into other subjects, not everyone wants to fuck their mother.
You did a very small time capsule. No character development. Why had she gone for a long period without sex? He had broken up with girlfriend but nothing on the Mom. Is she widowed, divorced, unmarried, etc? The up the skirt was very erotic for a young man and us older ones also.Keep writing.
Very nice story but you should continue with more! Gave it a 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fantastic story!!!! I would have loved to have been in that situation with my mother, her breast turned me on solo very much!! I would have loved to fuck her but it never happened!!!
Good story, good in the way that mom and son got closer together without embarrassing each other and eventually the result was what they both wanted...the ultimate love between a mom and son.