All Comments on 'Mother Road Ch. 05 - One For The Road'

Really enjoyed this keep up the good work.

It has been a great read.

Another great story in this series!

5

Another great entry in the series, thanks!

Wonderful episode and left a whole field of possibilities open for another chapter or 6! 😉! Walter and Dottie, the new security business Lura’s pregnancy, many possibilities. I sure wouldn’t mind seeing another episode of “Mother Road” showing up in my follow list.

Enjoy the Central Coast AKA “Paradise”!

Thanks for the enjoyable read.

Cheers

SAGE

I really enjoyed this! I was not expecting "action movie" style plot developments, but it was exciting. Oh, and I love the sex Laura and Tom have when he threatens to kill for her. That was dreamy.

Great some shootem up action and another guy falls for those green eyes!

This was amazing! Wonderful! I love every part of this story, bravo =]

Damn man... Your relationships advance at light speed... "Hello... I'm bill"... "Hello I'm jane"... "Lets get married"... "Ok"... Lmao...

-jaye-

As he gets older the pace gets faster and more convoluted. Great.