by ScaryOwl
My gosh.. loved every single word of it. Keep.up the good work and hope.to read more from you.
A simple story is enjoyable if written well, it goes for both porn and non-porn writing. And yours is)
Please to see more stuff from you.
Great story, quick character description, and looking forward to your next story.
"Mother sees her futa daughter's huge cock and goes crazy with lust" is one of my favorite bizzarely specific genres, and this is an absolute top-tier example.
Always enjoy a good futa story. Was wondering if Liz was going to ass-fuck Victoria. Part 2 perhaps? Well done.
D&A
Absolutely loved it. Efficiently and deliciously written. I felt like I could visualize everything so well. It moved quickly, and at times I felt it could’ve slowed down a tad, I.e., by playing up Victoria’s “should we be doing this? What if people found out?” angle. Also, great sex / oral sex scenes. Wish we could’ve seen another position or two, like doggy style.
Apart from that, I really loved it. Awesome job.
Please write part 2. What do you think will change in their lives when Victoria finds out she is pregnant?
Loved this story gave it a 5 you should continue with part 2 love a story with a she-male and daughter makes it that much better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome story but you jumped ahead to far please continue and make mommy become pregnant and have a son to join in sexually 5 stars