All Comments on 'Motherly Love Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Brilliant

This chapter was absolutely wonderful. Kyle and Marie’s love knows no bounds. I am sad however to see the series end but I hope you make another one like it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Parts missing

I realize its your story and all but you were all over the place. You never mention why Dad is no longer around. What happened to Brooke. Come on man this could have a real hot story but it ended up lame.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Perfect.

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I have always loved making stories and I love fucking. I must say I get a lot of emails and comments regarding the timeline of my stories. But I must say, there really isn’t one. Once you get past Motherly Love, then there is the There Goes the Neighborhood neighborhood seri...

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