All Comments on 'Mothers and Daughters Pt. 04'

I'm really loving this tale. I am a bit confused about the title though. How do the mothers factor into this? From the background it would seem neither mom would be up for any mother of the year awards. Is there some future interaction with said mothers? I guess if you keep writing, we'll find out, huh? Great job.

Thank you for your comment. All I can say is, I have completed the entire story. The remaining parts are with Literotica waiting to be published. Read on, and the title will become clear. As for how that unfolds ... spoilers !!!

Deltablonde

I rarely give out 5* reviews... Not because there are not a lot of good writers here, but Good is NOT Great!

I think 5*s should be reserved for the truly exceptional, what you have written up to this point certainly qualifies - it actually has plot and character development to go along with the sex.

Can't wait to see where this is going next. Keep it up!

how this tale turns to focus more on what the title suggest this story is about is obvious. The big secret is why Brianna and her mother stopped talking (I think that lending someone money she stole from her mother is a bunch of bs), we already know that both Brianna and her mother had a crush on Nate, and in a sense Brianna's mothers crush formed from knowing her daughter had a crush on him. I believe this might play a big role in what's to come. I may believe to know the key point that will lead this story towards the mother daughter aspect but I have absolutely no clue how you (the author) will get us there. I can't wait to find out.

Also I'm not sure if someone might have mentioned it in a previous comment but I realized that your story implicates that Brianna's and Nate's first intimate encounter took place when she babysat for his kids (when she was 16). At first I thought maybe the encounter took place when she was of age but when Brianna corrected Nate on how long it's been (12years I believe) Nate concluded that Brianna was 28 years old, meaning the last time he saw her she was still 16 years old. I only mention this because I think the whole underage factor is not something literotica permits.

Asides from that you've got a great story and I can't wait to finish it

Ok let's see, nate grabed victims wrist = possible fingerprints found during autopsy.

as mentioned, nate used cc @ restaurant with two scantly glad girls.

Resturant investigation finds nate identity.

Nates as former Canadian forces fingerprints are on file.

Current job will pull up, as address and other info.

In nates appartment is the audio records of the unlawful prostitution proprsal. I be live she mentions her name in these recordings, Leading to the identity of the scantatly glad girls and their AeD Status.

Most likely the German government will then freeze nates account, and track his recent cc activity.

he has his laptops with him so they can contact his ISP and posibly get the internet id's of these, tracking their use in the hotel.

If they find them at the hotel they find the sex videos.

The only bright spot here is that as a civilian advisor of the joint task force he is most likely protected under the status of forces agreement. (Sofa)