All Comments on 'Mother's Darling Boy Ch. 02'

Wonderful to share sister, or share son?

love it , good job/ ty, bill

LIKE THEY SAY.............INCEST IS BEST

I loved the ending.

His Grandmother next?

With Granny it looks like that ONE is Mike. good read keep it going , M ike is still young . Susan and Julie both had girls does that give you an idea.... good luck

Excellent read thank you. Hot and sexy scenes and some real loving too. I hope you are going to keep this going. So much more fun to be had yet.

Fun Fact: why do some people think a woman's vagina smells and tastes fishy?

"Flexing her cunt mussels she felt Michael's monster starting to sir back into life."

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Waiting for the next chapter. Michael should really take on his grandmother and knock her up nicely. It should be exciting to read his escapades with all three ladies together in the same bed.

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I like your story, but for fucks sake will you learn how to spell and use proper grammar. Also, is his name Michael, Matthew, Michele or Michel? I don't know how you feel about it, but I absolutely hate when I have to constantly reread sentences because of poor grammar, bad spelling or just plain sloppy word usage. Get a proofreader if you cannot figure this out for yourself.

Metisman had it bang on. It was so bad i gave up after 1 page

Please read your stories before posting them or get someone else to. Some of the spelling so obviously wrong even an eight year old could do better. The storyline is good so please try harder