All Comments on 'Mother's Day Miracle'

by BlinkenLights93

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please continue

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
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TSreaderTSreaderabout 4 years ago
A very good story!

Very well done! It would be great to see where they go in life together. Thank you!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 4 years ago
Very well written

Great storyline and build up. Ending was perfect.

Sexual build-up was so erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
YES

PLEASE CONTINUE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lovely

This is a beatiful story

Doesn't need an extension

So glad none of the nonsense of a man coming 4 times in an hour and the woman turning in to a raving nymph available to almost anyone.

Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Do the right thing

He needs to put a ring on her finger and they exchange vows to live as man and wife. Of course a baby bump will follow. Keep writing, please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Yes please continue

bogg99bogg99almost 4 years ago
Wonderful life saving mother/son story

I enjoyed the length of the story, the slow build-up of an erotic relationship and finally a sexual and loving partnership. Two lives with a brighter future. Super story-telling. Exciting and so erotic. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
continue

continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Awesome

Continue please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good start, but ...

it is obviously not finished.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Continue

Continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Definitely continue!!! Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Continue this great story include a pregnancy and possibly a threesome with Loren!!

BlinkenLights93BlinkenLights93almost 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the kind words!

The story will indeed continue, I want to make at least 3 parts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Can I call you mom?

Will you be my mom on Mother's Day? I want to be saying, oh mom, oh mom, oh mom, oh mom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Continue

Continue

Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 4 years ago

Loved it, a story of love and affection that tugs the heart. PLEASE continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Keep writing

Your work is smooth and we'll edited. Keep it up. Be more descripted

XYZ

linnearlinnearover 3 years ago
Excellent Writing

A thoroughly good story, I thought the epilogue could have done without the talk with Loren. Would loved to see more.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Awesome and please continue there was no incest but it was a real nice read 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SatyrDickSatyrDick7 months ago

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Continue por favor!

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

He doesn't bother to even contact her for years, despite being old enough to do so without daddy's permission. Unless he didn't have a freakin phone. He decides to be a freeloader and goes to said person he has been ghosting all this time. First day at her house, she catches him jerking off. Second day she catches him again and this time sniffing her panties like a pervert. And she said she is proud of the man he turned out to be! Nothing more indicative of a confident and mature young man than being a jerk monkey panty sniffer who freeloads. Truly every woman's dream, what a catch.

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I guess you could say that I'm a hopeless romantic. I'm still waiting for my significant other, but that doesn't keep me from fantasizing about when I do find her. The stories that I write are few, but they are heartfelt and romantic. I am born and raised in Oregon, and I'm a ...