All Comments on 'Mothers Day Surprise'

please continue..

Keep up the good work

Such a good mommy...........more adventures would be good........

Please continue!!!

Not much dialog. That makes it less interesting. This is nothing but a narrative.

A very erotic start to what I hope will be a good series. Mom is a sweet sexy hot woman that needs to be fucked and the son is a horny young man that can keep her pussy filled with his young cum. Perhaps he will get to have her in the shower as well.

I wonder if she has some birth control measures or will she become the mother to her son's baby.

It would be interesting to see her become a slut for her son.

Thanks

I never could get a hammock to work. Anyway nice story. Is this a one time story or do they keep getting together?

i loved it, but i do not believe u can fuck in a hammock either, but still turned me , i want to read another one about them

talented writer ! keep up!

It turned me on, but I had to fantasize to get off, and for good stories I next to never need to do that. But like I said it turned me on.

As far as the hammock thing goes, I can barely get on one by myself: and no I am not fat. So I find it a reach for people fucking on it but anything is possible.

and, for me, it failed to be exciting. The mistakes hampered the flow.

EYE ENJOYED YOUR STORY.. AND YES EYE RED THE ENTIRE STORY, BEGINNING TWO END.WHILE EYE DEW KNOT AGREE WITH SOME COMMENTS .. EYE DEW THINK (occasionally) THAT EWE SHOULD RIGHT SOME MORE,TWO THIS HEAR STORY..EYE FOUND IT TOO BEE ENTERTAINING & INTERESTING .....You have accomplished what all writers, should strive for..That being that we (most of us )your readers WANT MORE, & ARE LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE OF YOUR SUBMISSIONS...THANKS FOR SHARING.. JOE

great story...I loved the fact that he filled his mother wth his seed. Here's hoping the sequel has mommy growing a big love belly for her son.

i grew up with an abusive father. and i grew a sexual relationship with my mom at a very young age. and well she passed away a few years back. but i'll tell u this, nothings worse than a story where they reveal their relationship to the father. for one it doesnt happen in real life. somethings are best left as a dirty incestuous secret. if you continue this story, i'd suggest you keep her as the loyal wife to her husband, andlet her fuck her son every chance she gets.

i completey enjoyed this story. not the usual cum in the hand story, but one that makes me hard with a smile for the characters. stimulating to both mind and body. keep at it!!

so real, and very hot, such a sweet sexy story so many moms and son's reallly get to enjoy each other like this, there should be a mom and son site

This is a terrific story of the natural lust exploding between a sensual mother and her big strong good-looking boy. Tim is mightily attracted to his voluptuous mother, hugging and touching her every chance he gets. The boy is always hard around his mom, and mom sure knows what's happening in her boy's pants. She sees the big bulge between Tim's legs and, even better, she feels it whenever they get close--Tim loves to press his big hard on against his mother's ass, her belly, her legs, all over her body. What he's aiming for is the wonderful hole between his mother's legs, the same hole he came out of 18 years ago. Whenever his mom feels her boy's big fat 8-incher--so much bigger than her husband's--she gets dripping wet between her legs. Tim can smell his mother's cunt juice, the best thing a boy can ever smell, and he grins. He's got a big load in his heavy balls, and it's labeled, "For my mom!" His mother knows that too, and she desperately wants that load. Tim's big fat prick and his mother's warm wet twat come together, mom cums like crazy, and her boy unloads his big balls, shooting a huge dose of his creamy sperm up the cunt of his dreams--his own mother's cunt. Tim'll be doing that a lot from now on.

wish there had been a chapter 2

So lucky to have each other

4 stars, it was good, but keep him fucking her and cumming inside her pussy and get her pregnant, there just is something so hot in pregnant woman.

Most young boys would not have lasted that long. The moment her slick juices and the folds of her lips touched the tip of his purple head, he would have shot off. It's just that good. lol

Well done! This story accomplishes what so many fail at. Creating a story that has at least some plausibility and to make it exciting and sexy. I’ll return to this story in the future. Haha