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by NineHorseHtich

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mwdean92mwdean92over 2 years ago

Horrible writing, damn near impossible to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really need to understand tense, verb tense plus the use of tense with adjectives and proper nouns.

Proof reading will help, but only if it is done. I have seen a suggestion that the author record themself reading the piece. The recording is then played while reading the text. This might sound very minimal BUT is quite effective in identification of many types of errors.

Personally more into loving relationships than spiteful trysts. If animosity is what it takes to get these women off . . . So be it.

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Trying out kinktober. I'll be trying to re-edit my work when I get time this month but for sure in November when I'm not trying to force my self to grow. My twitter is: https://twitter.com/NineHorseHitch If you want to tip me use: https://ko-fi.com/ninehorsehitch