All Comments on 'Mother's Gas Ch. 01'

Absolutely loved it. what a great start. Can't wait to read more

Liked the start and the premise of the story. Good build up and setting the characters. As a suggestion, might want to slow it down some and let the suspense build up some more. Let them banter back and forth and develop their feelings for each other. Since she wants him addicted to her farts, she needs to get his emotions involved (I think). The trip up the mountain can be just as good as reaching the top. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I won't lie, that was interesting in that I never would think about that fetish. In the other hand I want to read about of it.

Would love to see more. Maybe a bit longer next time.

Scrolling i got disheartened with how short it was. But damn i want to see were this go's.

Very much looking forward to this story

Hey man i love the story. Cant wait to read more.

When can we expect the next instalment?

Great story honestly! Can’t wait for what happens next!

I loved this wish it were finished and I was so excited to get the thought of a next session from Mom.