All Comments on 'Mothers Know Best Ch. 02'

Bumped you up to 3* from 2* for the last segment. Yes, the sex scenes are pretty decent but there's no "real" interaction between your character outside of the act. You can't drop a bomb like his wife is happy he's having an affair with her mother in two sentences then move on. Actually, you can but it is not the definition of a very well written story. I'm sure you read some of the other top writers in this genre's stories. Figure out the gaps in yours and grow as a writer.

Chapter 2 was really good! I can’t wait to read chapter 3 and more.

Average story.

So, she's a Futanari?

You have to give us more. I am anticipating your story line where the wife becomes involved and mother love it.

GAWD THAT WAS HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!