All Comments on 'Mothership Wilderness Pt. 10'

Good story, but the "stupid noises" bit has got to end. Every time a woman gets off, Jake always comments to himself on them saying something "stupidly" or making stupid sounds, and it's coming off as infantile on his part.

keep up the good job mate...

typo?

Another fun chapter. I certainly wasn't expecting a "Lost in space" crossover, with Jacob filling in for Will. 5 stars.

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Well written content. Only complaint I have is every chapter seems to be the same thing, one character or another is forcibly taken/addicted to your main character. Is there any redemption in sight for all his victims?