by JoMaddox
I'm still enjoying it and looking forward to more. Naysayers...if you aren't enjoying it, stop reading. Either go along for the ride or read something else, but for f***s sake RELAX.
it has become very long in the tooth even for a young teenage boy.
I like this story a lot. The build up to him and her finally fucking will be worth it. Very hot!!
Page 3 makes no sense for this story, you're slowly ramping up the progression and you completely divert the story for no reason.
I mean, he' jizzing on her tits or down her throat, she' cumming in his mouth. Is there a difference between jizzing and cumming?