by JoMaddox
I mean, he' jizzing on her tits or down her throat, she' cumming in his mouth. Is there a difference between jizzing and cumming?
Page 3 makes no sense for this story, you're slowly ramping up the progression and you completely divert the story for no reason.
I like this story a lot. The build up to him and her finally fucking will be worth it. Very hot!!
it has become very long in the tooth even for a young teenage boy.
I'm still enjoying it and looking forward to more. Naysayers...if you aren't enjoying it, stop reading. Either go along for the ride or read something else, but for f***s sake RELAX.