All Comments on 'Motivation Ch. 01'

This is a great story. I wish I knew more about the particulars of her body, how she responded to each individual tongue, and even her actual response as she orgasmed. How each boy felt, his thought as he watched her being fucked and how her ass, pussy, and mouth felt as they were fucking her. Description makes it come to life.

You blew it literally in not making the story a tease and seduction. The correct way was the first senior to suggest it, then have her toy with the idea and have a progression where if they win one or all would get laid.

The way you did it the story got boring after the first lay and the reality she would have got fired as the jocks bragged.

This story is shit.

I thought the story was great, and i can't wait for the next one.

I think it was a great story, and would love to see hwo it continues