All Comments on 'Mountain Bachelor Ch. 01'

When does a little one come along.

I liked it, it begs for another chapter or 3.

Good beginning,looking forward to next part!!

Greta comes across as a calculating bitch. Not a sympathetic character at all.

Thanks for the comments!

About Greta being a calculating bitch:

I don't agree.

She is cautious and in this world, I wouldn't blame a woman being calculating even if she was so. What she expects is mutual kindness, nothing else.

@Dunkirk:

I hope not that soon :)

Brilliant start to their story. I loved the back an forth of their courtship, wedding and first couple of nights together. His inexperience vs. her slightly more manipulative nature works for them. She may tie him in knots for awhile but I'm sure once they can communicate better it will even out.

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Cheers

Interesting story!

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I hated this story. All games, manipulation, and training. Won't bother to read the follow up chapters.

There are no games, manipulation and training in this story. Two individuals without any idea about a relationship. What they perceive and how they cope with it.

But, thanks for the comment.

I wholeheartedly love everything about this story. Such a refreshing virgin sex story one could only hope to enjoy.

@Litstorieslover, thank you. I'm glad you liked it, this is my favorite story.