by Azo35
I love the descriptions and the forcefulness of the man. I'm very controlling and yet chaotic, so I like being told what to do in the bedroom. This was a pleasure to read, literally.
A little rough on the up start. More of crazy mountain man abuse than normal BDSM but still, no one got permanently hurt and it ended up with both of them having a really enjoyable time. I wished for more realism, wanting her to talk more, but realized the style of writing didn't work that way. I felt like he was banging a mute person and it made me think things were going too far. I think now he needed to go even farther about the place, the scenery, the need for privacy. I wanted to hear him roar and it echo down the mountain.