All Comments on 'Mourning Wood'

Word choices...

Shutter = window covering, Shudder = involuntary muscle contractions

Waste = trash, Waist = midsection of the body.

Poor writing really detracts from the enjoyment of the story.

Waist not waste but all in all a well constructed and sensual story. 5☆.

A good start. More of the same please!

Widowed mom's seek the next closest thing. My mom was honest" you're not as big but use it so much better" she told me our first time.

More of the same please. Great so far.

No build up a bit rushed

Mom needs to move in with her son to continue getting her cunt filled with his cum.

"Then her hand moved down to my waste..." gross, why is she swirling her hand around in the toilet for his unflushed shit? Oh wait, you spell words how you think they sound. Hooked on phonics? Ebonics? Whatever, get an editor.

Why does the son in these stories ALWAYS have a bigger dick than the father, whether he's alive and being cuckolded, or dead and buried? Oh right, all women like huge monster dicks that cause them pain. I keep forgetting that.

That was good.....and I agree with others - more please.

I liked the story. The previous 2 anon commenters listed the spelling errors I was going to mention. Consider getting an editor or proofreader. Five stars and a favorite point!

The mother should have ended up pregnant

Loved it.

Keep this story going. Add some anal and oral.

It has possibilities for another chapter or two.

Not bad has potential for more next time make the next part longer this is barely a tease

would be awsome if you was the same person i know with the same name

***Thanks for the read.

Hot, Hard, and Fast. Loved it! Maybe mom should go back with him. Be his live in maid, and fuck bunny. Just a thought.

Waste = Garbage, Waist = the middle part of a human being, usually wear the pants are wore at, the area of the torso where bending takes place. Other than that pretty good

The same happened to me, my father died when I was 16 years and my mother was very sad and lonely and one nigth I had to comfort mother, I don't really know but mom and was just kissing and fondlig each other and undressing each other and than my cock was inside my mothers lovely hole and moving in and out of her it was so beautiful and great.

Well Mom took control! Why not? Full marks. I like the fact that you do not waste any time - she just gets on with it! 5-Stars!

Good story, but there are spelling errors and the point-of-view feels wrong for the style of writing.

GOOD WHILE IT LASTED...FIVE STARS!

Not much of a story gave iy 3 stars just to short!!

logitle if not true

Just a 3 not much sex and to damn short

Liked the story but it was short 4 stars.

too bad, i think she really wanted to have his baby. that woudlnt be the worst thing in the world to happen

I AGREE THAT IT WAS TOO SHORT...WTF, CINCO ESTRELLAS!