All Comments on 'Mouse Bk. 02 Ch. 02'

You have me SO, so hooked...

Wow! Mouse is developing nicely! I can't wait for each chapter.

Conflicted characters, certainly. I like how their personalities mesh well with what they're doing. Michael is decisive and has left his doubts behind; he was even blind to her panic for quite a while. Mouse, on the other hand, is conflicted within herself, obsessed and lost in her own chaos.

Beautiful work, Rob! This is obviously going somewhere interesting. Look forward to reading the next.

...here on Literotica. Each scene sizzles with intense sexuality, and yet you still take the time to develop the characters and explore their personalities. Mouse could so easily have developed into a simple (yet extremely hot!) caricature after the first series, yet now we get to see her at her most unsure and conflicted. She really is a human being after all. Wonderful stuff.

I really don't see how this might end well, but I'd be happy to be proven wrong. More, please. Soon, please!

I really like this series, the two of them together is hot just leave it with those two they have alot more story to them. Don't ruin it with others.

I'm hooked. Now Mouse is feeling what Michael felt back home, the guilt, the indicisiveness. And Melanie...she definately knows something is up. I can't wait to she the shit hit the fan lol.

Still my all-time favorite story in this genre... and it only keeps getting better with each book!... Although I sorely miss the confident sexual powerhouse Mouse.... I find myself dearly enamored with conflicted somewhat shy and unsure... but still incredibly erotic Mouse! and again my favorite part is how you so believably create and maintain a viable reason for each character to act and react the way they do!

This has been one of my favourite series so far, and definitely a masterpiece in my opinion! keep up the good work.

This story is definitely progressing into an insight of Mouse's true feelings and desires. I love it.