All Comments on 'Movie Night'

by hisemerald

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sherlock40sherlock40over 19 years ago
Wow, this is a very hot story.

If more couples watched movies like these two do there would be fewer complaints about "why can't we go out more often?"

Great story. Thank you for your effort in writing this story.

hisemeraldhisemeraldover 19 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

You just made my already fabulous day so very much better! Thank you very much!

emerald

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
too short

Well written, this little romance story suffers from a good build up, too little character development, and a hurried plot. The love scene is too brief and ends rather abruptly. This story should have been considerably longer, which would have made it even better.

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