All Comments on 'Movie Night'

by Zedsded

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
How Sophmoranic

Back to school little one - then trade in your slut wife character for a whore who at least charges - sorts pays her way ya no.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Very HOT!

And here I thought it was well written, believable and something many a guy would show their respective wives of something that they would love to see happen.

I hope there is another chapter as you indicated, besttom69@cs.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Awesome

I need more.....this kept me going the whole time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I wish...

She was mine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Another great one

I read the newer story, "Marathon Girl," and was just blown away by it. So then I read this one, and it's even better. Great writing, great buildup, great details. Keep up the fine work and give us more of these stories!

Wilson SpaldingWilson Spaldingover 18 years ago
Hang on tight, you're in for a ride

Well done. Good, clean, dirty writing. Starts with a nice tease and builds at a pace that makes it easy to follow. I gives a little a depth and it gets you excited. I couldn't have asked for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great Writer

Shame they only wrote three stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Yes!

Please do a follow-up!

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 3 years ago

I don't see the appeal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Just a matter of time and they will be filing for the Big D.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Whore cucks husband with a friend.

Buster2UBuster2Uover 1 year ago

I like your writing. You are doing things in your stories like I used to actually do. No Humiliation! Having friends over to fuck with your woman. Nothing behind anyone's back. That is until your fucking asshole buddy comes back over while you are at work. Oh, she'll call you to let you know he is there because of her conscious. She'll be all thrilled cause he brought her flowers. But when you request that she call you again after he leaves so you can come home and reclaim her she forgets. Maybe they smoke something that gets her super high. Maybe he whispers to her about what a sick pervert you are and how she'd be better off without him. Regardless she hates you and has lost all respect for you. There isn't anyway to save the Relationship. So goes the end of my most precious marriage and love of my life. 5 stars good job writing my friend. thanks

Buster2UBuster2Uover 1 year ago

As usual the paragons of morality that attack every new story on Loving Wives are at it again. Don't let it bother you My friends. We all are a bunch of pervs just with different kinks. The only real trouble with sharing your wife is that once you get the genie out of the bottle there is no putting it back in. Once she starts enjoying strange cock on the side she is just plain on the loose. If she wants it bad enough she'll start taking it. The inhibitions that her mother put in her head you finally managed to remove and she is just starting to get wild. Late coming home from work? Better check her panties for fresh cum in them from someone else. Girl's night out? She is going to dance with all the hot guys there until she is horny enough to out to his car for a quickie or back to his place. Will she even tell you? Better check her panties for fresh cum. I don't know how anyone stays married anymore. Everyone is screwing around and cheating with someone else. Wife going out of town for a conference? You better believe she is going to be spending the night in some other room. Sorry. Good writing tho.

iammweaseliammweaselover 1 year ago

Holy writer who wants to slide down a Batpole Batman!!

Sorry to see Buster2U is another repressed closet floor licker.

Sorry kids it isnt morality (which you limp dicked wannabe jizz juicers use to attack everyone who isnt you) its really shitty writing quite often.

Literally you cum guzzlers will applaud with a wee winky spank the dumbest stories. You have little skill to discern between well written story to a terribly written, by the numbers laughably bad shitfest.

But you keep trying my "little" friends.

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