All Comments on 'Movie Night'

Where's the build up? Three paragraphs in, and he already caresses her pussy?

Fantastic !

Cant wait to hear more !

Could have been more detailed and better paced. But, absolutely nothing wrong with subject matter and content...none whatsoever. What caught my attention was that this descriptive coupling could have been any of a number of taboo couplings...cousins, brother-sister, mother-son, aunt-nephew, uncle-niece, brother and sister-in-law, two neighbors, co-workers, etc).

Good, but it could be better paced. Be sure to read through for those small, turn-off spelling&grammar errors.

Nothing like a cousin slowly stroking your hard cock under a blanket with others in the room. Back in the day, I was watching tv on the lounge at my cousins house, her mum sitting on a chair slightly in front of me, when her daughter said I am cold and jumped onto the lounge and said come on share the blanket, no way, get your own, we wrestled a bit, her mum said quiet, she grabbed the blanket, got under. I then felt her hand on my leg, I looked at her, she moved it up to my crotch, she tried to pull them down, I lifted up and helped her. She held my hardening cock and slowly stroked me, I was rock hard, leaking, she went faster, then slowed, a little faster, then slower, what a tease. an ad came on, her mother got up, I heard the toilet door, I said I am going to cum, she leaned over, put her mouth over my cock, I moved once and my cum shot into her mouth, I thought it wouldn't stop, I heard the flush, she got up, cum was on my leg and shorts and on the blanket as she wiped her mouth. Her mum came in and sat down, resumed watching the tv as I tried to wipe myself with my hanky. My cock would not go down, not helped by the fact that she began stroking me again, I reached over to her, she was fingering her pussy. I removed her hand and pushed a finger into her, she stopped stroking me, holding my hard cock, I felt her small clit, hard, I rubbed it slowly, she clamped her legs closed, shaking, she was a wet mess. We both stopped, her mum was snoring. She whispered to me, put it in me, no, oh please put it in me, stroking me faster, we were both young. Her mum woke up, that stopped everything. I think we should have a cup of tea. She went to help her mum, I went to the bathroom and cleaned up and calmed down.

I do hope so !

Oh fuck <3