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by daddysbeibe

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madtaffcatmadtaffcatover 5 years ago
Short but sweet with a great ending

Nice story with a twist. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
No bad

Not a bad story. It ooens up for sequels. But 1 thing you missed. The abbreviated version of refrigerator is 'fridge' not 'frig'. I was cslled out on that exact thing when I was in college.

daddysbeibedaddysbeibeover 5 years agoAuthor
"Fridge"

LOL...I knew that, guess I missed that typo. Thanks!

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 5 years ago
Nice!

Great story. Loved the twist at the end.

clitlicker4uclitlicker4uover 5 years ago
Hot

Hope this story continues. Sounds like she would make a good little fuck toy for him

auSolitude1964auSolitude1964over 5 years ago
Amazing...

Loved it... perfect twist. Poor Scott :)

SailingforfunSailingforfunover 1 year ago

This is one of my favorites. So well-written with exciting word pictures.

Scott

daddysbeibedaddysbeibeover 1 year agoAuthor

Scott

Thank you!

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