All Comments on 'Movie Night'

Only about 5% of a cumshot comes from your nuts.

Getting on his lap, even with a blanket, and the mom and friends don't hear you SLAMMING into her?

Stories were Dad and 19 year old daughter already have a history and basically just fuck only work if there is a lot more developed and detailed sex, in my opinion.

Also, introducing the friends and getting rid of them is a bit of a cheat, unless you have a sequel in mind.

Your story list shows proof that yo can do better, and I wish that you had. I would have loved if there had been descriptions of the butter being licked off of fingers, then toes, then...

The beauty of a good story, even fiction, is the believability. This is simply not believable

It's a story, and I read it on Literotica, I wasn't expecting something that was ever likely to happen, just something that I could read whilst fingering myself. I was never expecting a piece of art, but, for it's purpose, I think it's very good, and I thought it was very hot, thanks x

oooooh very sexy

A sequel would be nice. Bring in mom for a hot threeway, then have mom seduce sonny. Plenty of potential here.