All Comments on 'Moving Closer and Closer Ch. 06'

Another excellent addition. Find myself wondering if Kim cleaned up he daddy's load from her friends snatch after this go, but I like the direction you are taking this.

Thanks again for commenting. At this point, I see some girl on girl but I don't know how much. I had quite a crush on Tracey but I'm not sure how she wormed her way into this story, LOL, Time will tell.

I enjoyed this chapter. I hope for & look forward to the next installment! Please don't write Tracey out of the story. She can make this story into a trio instead of a duet!

Love the ways YOU describe how they get away with there fun and the family is clueless! Please keep the wife/mom clueless.

Kisses

Carol Ann

I love this story especially the way you keep emphasing his teenage lovers. Makes me remember my wonderful experiences being a teenage lover with grown men dicks. Felt so good. I look forward to reading more.

Thanks for reading and enjoying. I like to know my stories are reaching the readers. There is more to come in this love story. Thanks for commenting.

What a fabulous storyline, you have to continue this line, there should be an on going story in there, give them a beautiful and wonderful life and time together, well written,

Thanks very much for the pat on the back. This story will continue for sure. I write it when I need something sweet and romantic in my life.

It's chapter 6 already. We know Tracy and Kim have the same body. Stop repeating you think Tracy is ugly, not needed. Please stop saying teenager over and over and over. We know and it was so over done this chapter I almost couldn't finish it. Use their names, they aren't remotely strangers. Love the reason Tracy got involved. Can't believe he didn't know she was in the bathroom sucking his dick though

I can't believe it is chapter 6 and you still don't like my writing style. I must be doing something right though since you keep forcing yourself to read my story. Maybe you need to find another author and save yourself the grief.