All Comments on 'Moving Day'

Thank goodness Helen didn't give Bruce a chance to go FULL CUCK!!! She did the crime; no matter the reason, she was GUILTY!!!

This is the second time that I have read this story, I found it just as hard to read the second time because the emotion written here is so well formed. The anguish, pain and anger I feel reading this a testament to Dare2Bro’s writing. But in the way it ended with no real closure, Debbie just ran. I was sad.

She was broken and left everything. She likely thought that she was doing them all a favour, but my guess is that this family would forever be haunted by her actions. I don’t know that Bruce would ever be able to have a real relationship again, or it would take someone very special to lift him up.

As I said, sad.

Very well written

One fuck of an emotional roller-coaster if a story! Such twists & turns, OMG!!! I was shocked at Sandra's death, thinking that there'd be a probability of the marriage continuing. Left this ol' guy with tears in his eyes. Kudos on a well written story. 5stars!

This is your most powerful work. Much more meaning than all the rest. Congratulations.

Na!!!!!

you put some consideration of child abuse. to hell with these men must be punished. they are sick bastards. reading, fantasizing and reality is different. children must be protected. women, close your legs whoring and look for your children's safety. if bastards are abusive you can find help from so many places. and don't let you past hide with your loved one. if they love you more than the past they will help you. there are so many ways to overcome your situation.

Should be taken out and shot and buried under the jail. Why do I say this? Because as a little boy 70 years ago I was raped and molested.

She still was a cheating slut, no matter the reason...

I am unclear how the agent new where she was the whole time, was she still giving evidence? Everything before that made sense even if dark. Otherwise really good.

Such things are actual factual life

Events. Such hurt and mental anguish lasting a lifetime.

Life can be cruel so cruel.

Thanks for the read..

How is this tagged btb?

I have just found this writer and I must say I Love his stories

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Deeply haunting story that shows our past traumas shape our current lives.

11/10!!!!!

This is food for thought, a sobering finish. Just a little problem with the mix up of the names between Sandra and Helen in one section but the whole thing is still 5 star worthy.

Wow….that was heavy……sad. Great story that got very dark.

Well written, very sad subject.

I would be lying if I said a fun read, but a well done read. Could have been more detailed of course because every one of the characters could be expanded and never explored, mind if you wanted to go more sexual to explore her news career. But as a survivor well written no triggers for me, but I bet others might humm might be why i have such a hard time with even tangential incest stories but handled as well as it could be I think well done Dare2Bro..

Very sad, well written, the meat thing is the saddest thing of all.

Just a constructive criticism for you. Dont let the brain dead trolls dictate the stories you write. End your stories where you want to end them! The new part of this story would have made an excellent stand alone. You handled a sensitive topic well. Good job

That sure was something, but honestly almost no one would want marriage counselling with someone that fucked up.

the only good thing about the story is the hoe had enough respect to leave and die away from her family, lest they catch anything from her diseased body

Unbelievably dark and twisted. No hope. No redemption. Just damnation. Helen couldn't be healed. A tragedy.

It rings true, and so sad.

Unfortunately, our society and culture today is riddled with this type of insanity and evil... there are even forces that are trying to get laws passed that make it legal for adults to have sex with minors... there are judges, lawyers, politicians, clergy, business tycoons, and all manner of powerful folk trying to make it possible and legal to have sexual contact with minors... NAMBLA is a prime example. 5-stars for the extremely disturbing but honestly realistic story. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Thank you. Sad but reads relatively real. It can be hard to change. I wasn't a fan if the original ending.... too abrupt. There follow up as you warned went in a dark and unexpected direction but it felt natural flowing from there original. Well done with the writing. Not an enjoyable story but i am glad i read it as it was thought provoking.

rather dumb overall. stated wit moving furniture to an "empty" ? cabin and just got worse, but I did read it all.

Why did Sandra get served divorce papers?and as for the pathetic apology for a man called Bruce, she fucks any and all men she wants and he still wants her, what a fucking wanker.

It was good, in a dark way. But... but a couple of things seemed strange. First is how easily Helen was released. If she was in a verge of total breakdown, as psychiatrist said, it should be months, if not a years. And leaving her alone with an old mother was pretty stupid. Its not an uncommon thing when people seemed to be okay and get better with therapy, and them, out of the blue, end their lives.

And second, Helen herself, if she had some sort of self-awareness how fucked up she is, why didn't she get help? I know its not a necessary thing, but I think a person who had some pieces of sanity would've tried at least.

Unbelievably dark and sad. Feel sorry for Helen and her family. She never had a chance. Amazing she made it as long as she did in the marriage before she debased herself. Terrible mental illness as she relived her rapes over and over just with new make participants taking the place if her monstrous father. She was doomed. At least she got some years of happiness. Debbie was an enabler and a demented slut. What is her excuse? Very telling that Helen always documented her trysts. Reliving them over and over, reaffirming her terrible self image as per her father's hideous molestation and rapes. Poor Bruce. He saved her for a while. But finally her demons got her. After the second time found out and the inevitable looking divorce, she had a full psychotic break and just "cut" herself over and over again, feeding the dark side of her soul. She had no reason to try to function or pretend to function as "normal" with the damage done to Bruce and her family. The psychiatric facility did a terrible job and she left her family to destroy herself over time. Why the Special Agent knew where she was and kept it hidden is beyond belief. Incredibly sad. Helen died in pain, never knowing peace. Her almost 25 years with Bruce and her family, of which some 20+ she remained true, was her respite from the storm in her soul, though assuredly still beset by her inner demons, but with the second discovery, those demons drove her to her death.

A reasonably good story with a very sad story line and a bad ending But very readable (jaybee186)

Very well told story. It affirms the wisdom that we should never judge another until we have walked a mile in his shoes. Helen is a fictional character but she represents so many others who have suffered some of what she did. It is a number that nobody knows.

Helen was abused the poor thing BUT once your an adult there is NO EXCUSES for cheating or anything else. The world is too PC and gives to many excuses for crap people like Helen. The one I feel most sorry for is Bruce who did nothing wrong and married a undercover whore, Bruce deserved better.

Just think what poor Helen might have been like if she hadn't been abused. I like porn, but I draw the line when it comes to forcing young kids. If you say different, I'd love to meet you in a dark alley. I have no problem hitting you on the back of the head with a sledge hammer.

Sorry just because she was abused as a child that shouldn't make the hubby try to forgive and forget what she did.

Very difficult subject matter and for brainless morons commenting without experience I hope you never have the anguish of finding out what it does to some people. Sadly, I have had the anguish and wouldn't wish it on the worst anonymous cretin spouting bullshit here.

To the writer, you've dealt with this as well as can be expected, which makes me fear that you too have had the experience in your family. Thank you for not trivialising any part of it. That Helen couldn't 'make it back' from her dark place may on sober reflection educate some here as to the real depth of the damage done to young people by these savages. Yes some recover very well and their well lived life is their best revenge, sadly many can't and don't and unfortunately they meet various fates, some more appalling than others. Thanks you for writing the story.

Wow. That was really dark.

I notice how anonymous posters are righteous and unforgiving. They’re what’s wrong with this country

While this was well portrayed I will say that it lands too close to reality. Perhaps the fact that it's too real is what makes it unpalatable. I simply don't want to read this type of story on this site.

Are the kids his?

Thank you for a sensitive look at a very real problem. I taught senior high school for 37 years and saw more than one student with just this life scenario. I don't know where they went on to after graduation, but I see the truth in your story. Thank you for a sensitive presentation.

Happy people do what is biologically logical. Unhappy and broken people do horrible things. One must escape the broken (Tommy) and do what one can to aid the unhappy (Helen) from a distance. Self-preservation is biologically logical.