All Comments on 'Moving Her On Pt. 01'

Loved it !

Fascinating story. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Definitely not for me. Zero redeeming qualities, I found this story to be 100% non erotic. Being submissive does not equate to accepting any and all abuse, her so called lover is a power hungry abuser a wannabe dominant an utter piece of shit.

I’ve read enough stories online to know that artistic license dictates that obviously she’s going to love everything he/ they do to her. With that in mind it’s pointless for me to attempt to read anymore.

Best of luck with your writing, Tess (uk)

Hi Tess, I have finally had it made clear to me - thanks to a useful comment on my 'Apologia' essay - that the BDSM category here is not for 'Story of O' subject matter (despite that being the no1 world renowned BDSM novel - which is my excuse) but the purview of what I call 'lifestyle BDSM' stories. And that's fine. I understand. for 'lifestyle' ppl, the events in my stories - which are pure fantasy - go much too far.

The last thing I want to do is to upset ppl.

So I am trying to get Literotica to recategorise all my stories into Non-consent/Reluctance, where I hope they will not be read by people expecting something else / who will be upset.

So far, I've had no help from admins, but fingers crossed.

If there's anything you can do t