All Comments on 'Moving In with Mom Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I do not like the new format , sucks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

the intro was bad and the character needed to be more developed

dukea98dukea98about 3 years ago

You are obviously planning on another chapter or two. Any idea when that will happen?

lotalance50lotalance50about 3 years ago

Interesting characters and story line. Installments too short. Frustrating.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Decent enough story line although I would like to see considerably longer chapters. What you've written so far would well go into one chapter. Please keep going though, I look forward to reading more!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 2 years ago
Almost autobiographical

Exaggerating drunkenness is a ploy mothers use in tantalizing sons.

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