All Comments on 'Moving My Sister'

by pujo1950

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Quite good

It felt like the set-up had more thought and prep than the sex. The sibs were likable and enjoyed doing things together, which you told us a bit about, with description. When it came time for the bedroom, you told us what they did, without much description or emotion.

So, more description and emotion, please?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So he was supposed to be at U-Haul by 9 but left close to noon? How does that work?

Mr_BradyMr_Bradyabout 2 years ago

Nice work. I’ve been reading more brother/sister incest stories lately. This is one of the better ones.

Five stars for this one ☝️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved ur story . Want to inform u that kamasutra is Indian book of love making.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The "hey, I've always wanted to try anal, want to?" bullshit completely ruined this. "Aww shucks, why not get some shit on my dick while fucking a gender-neutral, dry hole?" Blech.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 2 years ago

Nice, but felt a little rushed. Could have built up the romance better. 5/5 though, liked the story line.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Felt like this was written by a school kid, or some one with no sexual experience. All the sex scenes felt rushed

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice story. Thanks for not putting in garbage such as "like a pro" or "precum".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sophomoric

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Gave me a "stiiffy" 5 stars

fisheronefisheroneabout 2 years ago

It needs another chapter where mother confronts them about brothers underwear beside bed and mom being happy them keeping each satisfied till they are ready to start a family.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good story but I give it 4 stars out 5 because of the golden shower that was a big turn off for me but other then that Good job

Crusader235Crusader235about 2 years ago

Absolutely nothing wrong with an older sister taking her brother in Hand, Mouth, etc. Loved out, and how they have a great life together. Five stars.

HtslHtslabout 2 years ago

The story itself is good, but in my opinion much too short.

linnearlinnearabout 2 years ago

I've read several stories today that I know I've read before but they are list as just being released. Not a problem as they were all very well done.

Ozgood13Ozgood139 months ago

Great work. Just keep them coming.

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