by pujo1950
Quite good
It felt like the set-up had more thought and prep than the sex. The sibs were likable and enjoyed doing things together, which you told us a bit about, with description. When it came time for the bedroom, you told us what they did, without much description or emotion.
So, more description and emotion, please?
So he was supposed to be at U-Haul by 9 but left close to noon? How does that work?
Nice work. I’ve been reading more brother/sister incest stories lately. This is one of the better ones.
Five stars for this one ☝️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved ur story . Want to inform u that kamasutra is Indian book of love making.
The "hey, I've always wanted to try anal, want to?" bullshit completely ruined this. "Aww shucks, why not get some shit on my dick while fucking a gender-neutral, dry hole?" Blech.
Nice, but felt a little rushed. Could have built up the romance better. 5/5 though, liked the story line.
Felt like this was written by a school kid, or some one with no sexual experience. All the sex scenes felt rushed
Nice story. Thanks for not putting in garbage such as "like a pro" or "precum".
It needs another chapter where mother confronts them about brothers underwear beside bed and mom being happy them keeping each satisfied till they are ready to start a family.
Good story but I give it 4 stars out 5 because of the golden shower that was a big turn off for me but other then that Good job
Absolutely nothing wrong with an older sister taking her brother in Hand, Mouth, etc. Loved out, and how they have a great life together. Five stars.
I've read several stories today that I know I've read before but they are list as just being released. Not a problem as they were all very well done.