All Comments on 'Moving to San Diego Pt. 02'

great story -- be sure to let us know when the next chapter comes out!

I really like the idea of him making her pregnant, plus making her his own personal fuck toy. He has already broken down all of her objections of fucking her. Now he has to push her into anal sex and he will have all of her holes.Thanks for the really erotic and super vivid sex story....Rich

So when will her belly start swelling. I'm hoping that you two don't have her divorcing your dad....

It's no use I didn't even get half way through the first page as your GRAMMAR!!! is so hopeless that I can not stand it any longer,GET SOME HELP QUICK!!!! as I have a suspicion that most of all your other stories could be suffering the same fate and that you are stuffing up some good stories.

grammar, er, or or, grammar is grammar. Use your imagination!!!!!

I love the series but please have someone proofread your stories before submitting them. Most of your spelling/grammar mistakes are quick and simple fixes.

Such graphic writing - certainly paint a complete picture of lust as well as satisfaction! His ego may get him into trouble!

I like the story just hate the fact that he is practically worshipping her and she is so reluctant at the time until he spends an hour convincing her? Its like she has everything and he is her servant and its annoying. I wish she would be more proactive and show a bit more initiative after he’s conquered her… like she has to please him if she wants him