All Comments on 'Mr. and Mrs. Douglass's Pool'

How about a party. Chet his wife charlie and the girls. One big fuckfest

That is exactly what happens ;) thanks for the comment, Dunkirk!!

The awful style put me off. Use capitals for names, please!

get real, no guy can cum that many times in such a short time and it sure doesn't shoot all over the place like you said it did, sounds like a little kid writing this story with no knowledge of how the male's body works. one star.

You've just entered a world of conflicts and confusion, the world of Woman. If you keep up this kind of pace your Dick won't need your hand

That's good work if you can find it, now do us proud and keep that pool spotless.

Write more about Charlie’s adventures

thanks for the feedback....even if some of you are negative and unbelievers regarding the power of youth!

I check daily hoping for a new or continued story..,

I see after 2 months still nothing new...