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A few minutes later, Mrs. Anonymous was buttoning her blouse and I my pants. I paused to look at this little beauty and an interesting idea came to mind. I put it to words.
"Here's what I want you to do tonight. You with me?" She nodded her head like a good little wife. "Okay," I continued, "when you get home tonight, I want you to say to your husband, 'I saw your mommy tonight.' Got it?"
"Uh . . . I'm not sure. . .," she began, slipping one foot into its previously discarded heel.
"Okay. One more time. 'I saw your mommy.' 'Tonight.' Say it just like that. Really fast: 'I saw your mommy.' Then slower, after a pause: 'Tonight.'"
"I saw your mommy. Tonight." There was almost a question mark at the end of her repetition.
I laughed. "Yeah. You got it. Exactly. I saw your mommy. Tonight."
Again, that strange look, as though I were some sort of freak. 'That's okay,' I thought. 'I fucked Mrs. Anonymous tonight. And soon enough, he's going to read all about it.'
Within ten minutes, I had returned her to the bar, decided to blow off the hotel, and was speeding south along Interstate 43, Chicago-bound.
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It's Friday night, you hardly firmed jacking sub. Do you know where your wifey poo is?
I thought not.
Life's a bitch, but it's also a choice, eh? So choose: are you going to remain that loving trusting wimp who wanders through fields smelling the flowers, or are you going to mosey on down to the bar to find your whoring wife and march her into an oven-of-death?
- COMMENTS
soami55over 2 years agoWe (hetero couple) read together. I (husband) was completely captivated by this story. I am still struggling to find the appropriate adjectives to capture my thoughts, my praise for this piece of work. This is by far the best piece I have read on Literotica.
Very well put together, well written, a very captivating piece. Someone should make a short movie of this. Actually it could really be a full length movie.
I am a bit concerned that the rest of the stories may not be as good.
We will press forward.
Debbie & Soami
leansterabout 4 years agoYeah! Take THAT, Anonymous!
Now we know the real motivation for his vacuous, moralizing comments: Anonymous is a humiliated, pencil-dicked cuckold himself.
And, he didn't comment on this story...hmmm.
It's okay, Anonymous....you don't have to cry. It's just a story.
calibammaover 4 years agoAm I signed in? Lol if this is a true one then you got me Anonymous real good 😂😂😂
andoverblondeabout 6 years agowhat a wonderful imagination! and your attention to detail was perfect - and funny.
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI am left speechless. I bow to you and your clever wordsmanship.
rightbankover 6 years agoThis story is so good! It works because it travels from one category to another.
Anatomy of a seduction. LW,. How To,. Sarcasm and Humour,.
Filled with drama, mystery, technology, retribution, sex, tongue in cheek (and every available orifice) and a hint betrayal.
One indication of a well written story is the reaction of the readers. Wow! This writing exercise poking fun at anonymous hypocrites has stirred up the trolls. Haters gonna hate. All while proving the point of the writer. lol. I have to wonder if the level of vitriol is the result of how close the subject comes to the reality of the lives of the anonymous negative posters.
It's Saturday evening, mr anon, do you know where your wife is?
Nexttimeroundover 7 years agosexy and disconcerting. Others have commented on the possible validity of the tecky aspects -- oops and potentially ouch. But also a bit peevish, perhaps?
