by NoOne6669
shouldn't these stories be under Mind Control versus Loving Wives? The guy obviously has some sort of power over these hot, attractive, young women to be able to have sex with them despite his unappealing appearance. It doesn't come off as the women being consensual at first, which would possibly justify the Loving Wives category. Then he puts the 'whammy' on them with the eyes and they turn into wanton sluts. Just wondering...readers might feel cheated. The majority read this category to have cheating wives found out and punished for their transggresions or the exreme opposite where the husband is a most willing cuckold. Are you going to work any of this into the story line by introducing the husbands and their reactions? With or without the 'whammy"?
But admit that my focus is: how will Mr. Bonivich' and Karens affair develop? Is she falling in love with him? Will he take her away from Brad? Will Brad have the pleasure of watching this superior old stud please his wife?
Please make this story a long one!
I liked the story, I just don't believe it should be in the LW catagory.
yep, its a fantasy of an old, fat, balding man w/ short dick. or an immature virgin nerd. oh well.
Old Bonivich is the perfect master. Wife and I both turned on!
i think it would be interesting to have mr.B work his "magic" on some older matronly gal who happens to live in this same building. after he gives her the usual treatment-work in some sub/dom action with the younger and hotter gals he's already cast his spell on. make the younger
women submit to this older one...just an idea?
Been waiting a long time to watch Mr B work his magic . . .
This man that can bed these stupid women, where the husbands discover what he does and finds a way to put an end to their marrigaes and him.