All Comments on 'Mr. Jones, the Neighbor Ch. 05'

... and we can't wait to find out either how far this will go. Excellent idea to point out the sub in Max's mind!

I really like how you tell a story. Excellent writing! And I am glad to see that you are still adding to it. There are so many excellent stories out there with great potential that just stop. Thank you for sharing your work. Looking forward to more!

The way Peter turned the tables on Max was so hot, even making Max a piss slave was so hot! Please, sir, may we have some more?

This is riveting! Please continue the series. I would love seeing Max and his dad both in the sub role side by side.

The tension was so great… wondering exactly what the degradation would be… and then the hot yellow stream in his mouth..OMFG.. perfect!

JT