All Comments on 'Mr. Right? Ch. 02'

The love(lust) at first sight thing is getting really old really fast. So i hope your story picks up (sex) very soon. People don't care to read romance in this section.

Keep doing what you're doing! i like the backstory & build up. You can always read about "f**king"---- i thought this category was interracial love. screw the asshole who would suggest that what you've done is anything less than perfection!!!!

This I hope is gonna get very interesting. I like these two already.

I can't wait for more. You are doing very well in building up the anticipation.

chapter for the characters and gives the story and romance substance. Love this kind of story.....JV

Really funny and such a good read.

Seems to be a bunch of characters thrown together just to write some erotica based on the description of the later chapters. Lacks structure and consistency. Completely lost my interest.

next time sign in and maybe ur comment will mean something. on anthoer hand, angelicsounds, i really liked this. i know something crazy and funny is about to happen :)

If you did not want to read it you could have just clicked the back button instead of being a bitch about someone elses writing. Angelic is a terrific writer and has hooked everyone who actually likes to read a plot along with the sex. Next time don't leave a comment for someone else unless you sign in to show you have the courage to back up what you write.

Great story. Very sexy and funny.

Really interesting + funny too

Loved the exchanges between Staci and Matt. You really described well the inner thoughts and feelings she has for him and that really sets up later installments nicely. Oddly enough, while Matt seems to be better off from what his thoughts reveal, he does go closer to the "jerk" side right now. I'll be interested to see how you soften him up.