All Comments on 'Mr Valens Back Door Policy'

very hot!

this is a good one.

will you write a 2nd chapter.

A well-told tale. Thank you.

Hot and Sweet, delicious! dear Veronika, you are good, keep writing.

MMM. Makes me want to clean houses!

Wish I had a cleaner like that!

I love that he is such a sweat caring man...

I only wish her moans were more telling. The reader doesn't know much about her true enjoyment along the way. Comments like "Oh yes", "I can't believe how good it feels" and "oh god I'm cumming" would really heat it up without adding true dirty talk (assuming that wasn't part of her character).

Wonderful.