All Comments on 'Mr Valens Back Door Policy'

Wonderful.

I only wish her moans were more telling. The reader doesn't know much about her true enjoyment along the way. Comments like "Oh yes", "I can't believe how good it feels" and "oh god I'm cumming" would really heat it up without adding true dirty talk (assuming that wasn't part of her character).

I love that he is such a sweat caring man...

Wish I had a cleaner like that!

MMM. Makes me want to clean houses!

Hot and Sweet, delicious! dear Veronika, you are good, keep writing.

A well-told tale. Thank you.

this is a good one.

will you write a 2nd chapter.

very hot!