All Comments on 'MRI'

Liked it, but from my (female) perspective, I would have far preferred to have it end after, "What kind of woman...?" The use of bitch, slut etc and the apparent need to have the guy cum in the remaining paragraphs struck me as immature and added nothing to the story.

Agreed, from my (64M) perspective, the last few paragraphs don't match the tone of the first part. Ending the story earlier would make it even stronger. Still 5 *