All Comments on 'Mrs. Asken's Dilemma Ch. 01'

by GreenEggs35

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

Well written, so keep it going. You are a natural story teller. You might also include some of your experiences also. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good not too rushed

Mother's usually understand what their son's need. Janet was courageous enough to give her sonn the help he needs in an unusual but effective way. A very refreshing story of this type. keep writing.

Phantom1925Phantom1925over 13 years ago
Great start!

Bravo........Look forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
couldnt finish

Sorry couldnt even finish the chapter. The dialog and actions of your characters are too unrealistic.

tatlockstatlocksover 13 years ago
Liked your story, simple & sexy.

Thanks for an interesting story. Please keep writing. Really enjoyed your style and how you told the story with the mother's thoughts adding to the tension.

PaulwilliamPaulwilliamalmost 6 years ago
Wow

What a lovely way to cum off, lucky boy Tom

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Unrealistic

This guy can shave his pubes, but doesn’t have enough energy to get up & pee?

Also, why would the mom dump pee in the sink and not the toilet? Yuck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Home care

I like it. I like the idea of the mom doing whatever her boy needs. Hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved this! So damn hot!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I loved it. accurate. exciting and erotic. I'm anxious to read the rest of your stories. Thanks.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a21 days ago

Interesting opening. The mother finally accepts her son as a sexual being. However, in the mind of the mother, he is not equal to her as to sexual status. It will be interesting to see how the mother reconciles her motherly instincts with her sexual being.

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