by YYsguy
I gave it a 3 because I liked the premise but there were huge holes and a complete lack of affection or emotional descriptions. What happened to the Dad? Where did the table at the beginning come from and how did it fit into this story? Your descriptions of the sex are incomplete and not even clinical much less emotional or affectionate. What did selling breast milk have to do with anything?
"End of part 1".
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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story before opening it ALWAYS earns an automatic rating of 1.