All Comments on 'Mrs. Brown's Tale'

I liked your story. I would have liked it to be longer. Perhaps 2 or 3 chapters. I think you could have made the seduction a little longer, and the sex a little more.

I won't judge whether you have a 'future in writing', but technically you write well enough for me to post stories also in the future on this site.

As for topic and content of your story it moved very quickly from nothing - without any kind of prior indication or any kind of description of either of the two's feelings/longings/desires/fantasies or sexual practice - to consummate incestous motherfucking, I suggest tbat you should give the readers more of a lead to understand why such an important social barrier gets broken.

Love the story, want to hear more.

Definitely needs a part 2

Not one of those who fancied their moms. She was 44 when I was born. That said I loved it and it needs a sequel or 2. I like the idea of swinging that was hinted. Also a nice hot tub & pool not used in the story, could have expanded.

Verbose!

I gave up before finishing the story.

You could have chosen to tell the story in half the words, but as you said, you wanted a lengthy story...

Love it. Extremely well written. Please please continue.

I like the story. The character and plot development was good for your first story. Some romance and intimacy would be nice. Impregnation seems to be a bit early due to a lack of character development. I rated the story 5 stars.